Okay, well, I don't really want to clutter up the Updates page too much, but I don't want to delete all of that stuff, so I'm putting it all here instead of totally getting rid of it (I'm something of a packrat...). Because I think that I may start on the second book today... ^.^
-Rachel
Hm... okay, well, as you see, the first entry didn't quite come out the way it was before, but whatever, the rest are fine.

August 22nd, 2008

Rachel has officially sixty pages in her book. I repeat, SIXTY pages. The big six-oh. In the story for the last few pages, somebody dies-no, not a main character- and Leah and Oliver are out on patrol. Damien and Maeve have a conflict within themselves, but we don't quite know what will happen between them. Readers, you better request your latest copy of the story if you want to know what happened today! Trigger

August 23rd, 2008

Alright people. Rachel is out of town for the weekend, so no huge updates on the book. I am also taking a trip into the next town. Soo... we won't really be here.. Don't expect anything. We'll try to post some more news if we can, but I only get the word from Rachel, and only if she absolutely needs me...Remember people, this uploaded once a day, maybe less. And don't bother Rachey. She's busy, you know. Typing away for people like us! Alright. I'm out. It's movie time. Trigger

August 26th, 2008

Okay. We-the people who made this website, A.K.A. Rachel and I- were gone this weekend, so I am typing up the information now. Also, school started back up, which happens to mean less time on the computer for some people. Cough, cough, me. Okay, well, Rachel has now added probably two to three pages of her book, and has decided to have a cliffhanger when she sent it. She is not allowed to have any cliffhangers at the end of the book, or at the end of any of the other books, and not even when she sends it. All of us, her dearest friends, have agreed on that. That being said, Rach is writing more of the story now as we speak. Do not bug her. Luckily, we have no homework today, so she can type for a long time. Let's all hope she writes about five pages. Trigger

August 29th, 2008

Rachel has finally written the "kiss". I cannot tell you how happy I was/am when I got that copy. Sure, it was short, since Rach isn't into the whole romance, kiss, couple thing like I am. If she ever needs help writing something romantic, she'll call me and let me know. Anyways, I, Trigger-A.K.A Bethany- will be going out of town for maybe a day, maybe two, depending on what we do, tomorrow, SATURDAY...So... I don't know if I'll be near a computer, but, Rachel promised that she'd type today, so whatever she gets done, she'll send to me, and I can update it at a later time. Well, gotta fix the rest of the website! Trigger

September 6th, 2008


Rachel has sent me the latest copy-though I was unable to access it because of my stupid computer- and she has written another four pages, roughly, she says. So...I had to have my best friend print it out so I could read it, since we- Rachel, the other best friend, and I- are now together at a sleep over, me typing this with them on my shoulder(s). We're trying to watch Samurai Girl on ABC Family. Hehehe... =D We'd appreciate getting back to that now. Oh, and to all the people that have a copy of this story, wish you were here with us!!!  Trigger


September 22th, 2008

Okay, sorry people, we've had no power for the past WEEK, soo yeah, nothing new on the book, or at least not this one; we had some fun writing anecdotes for the next two. (Teehee...) So anyways, I am going to go and write now. Seeya.... -Rachel

September 28th, 2008

Alright people... Due to hurricane Ike, I haven't had power for ten days. But luckily, we had a generator and we survived... Well, Rachel has written a little bit more to her story, about six pages worth I believe, and we just got power last sunday night, which was pretty awesome. Well, my dad and I are going biking, doing twenty miles plus hills at terri hershi park. It's going to be flippin awesome... Alright, gotta go and get ready!!! Have a fun weekend!!!  Trigger

October 4th, 2008


Rachel is having fun writing the "abyss" more than she is writing in the actual story in the first book. The abyss is when, basically, everyone dies during the war. She's trying to describe exactly how everyone's death is going to be like, and how they're going to be killed, like, by whom and when and where. All that stuff. Well, anyways, she's still about on page seventy five, maybe a few pages more. Oh, and I almost forgot...WE'RE HAVING A BALL!!! It's going to be super exciting...Okay, well, that's all I have to say for now. And another thing, I've written about eight different little stories that might be inserted or rewritten by Rachel for the book because I am her trigger, and also because I will be narrating in the third book. Also, our friend Amy has been able to write a thing or two, preparing for her narrations in book two, and she's helped out with a few things too. We hope that when we finally finish book one, we might be able to insert it onto this website. Plus, anything put up onto this website IS copywrited. So, please do not take it. Trigger

October 11th, 2008


Okay. I tend to say that a lot, but oh well. So, lately, Rach hasn't been able to really type anything, and, I don't mean to say this in a mean way, but I've been writing a whole lot lately, from when I get to narrarate in the book. So far, I have nine different chapters, each about three to four pages long. So, yeah. It's really fun to write, but really hard and confusing, because we all have different aspects, and Rach wants me to write aboutthis, not that, and she wants this person to be this, not that, or basically, not what I thought they were. So yeah, but, that's pretty much it. Other than Rachel is just starting to write right now... Trigger

October 26th, 2008

Nothing New. Seriously.  Since another friend of ours and myself have been writing from when we get to narrate, Rachel says it's too confusing, and she can't focus on the story... So, it's kind of like we're being banded from the book...Yeah...That's right...And Rachel hasn't written anything yet. She's focusing completely on the Scholastic Writing Contest now...Yup...Oh, the only news I really want to talk about it that...GUITAR HERO: WORLD TOURCOMES OUT TODAY!!! Can't wait.. I hope we get it for Christmas or something...lol

November 9th, 2008

Rachel hasn't written anything yet, and it's been about two to three weeks. She turned in her Scholastic writing, so hopefully, her mind will go back to the story...Hopefully...That's the only update that I have for all of you...I'm very sorry. Trigger

November 13, 2008

Hey, in my own defense, I did have an actual deadline for that... x-(... anyways, I have cleared page eighty!!! Haaaa, I'm so happy... plus I had a chocolate... so I'm a bit hyper, but that's not what I was talking about. As I was saying, I cleared page 80, which puts me only 20 pages away from my goal of 100 total pages. And I will not send to Bethany or our other friend, Amy, until I finish... although there is a deal up for negotiation... hehehe.... this is fun... ok, I'll stop now. Bye!  --Rachel
Oh oh oh, one more thing. I believe I have a title--at least, it's the best I've got and I'm no great shakes at coming up with good titles... :-/... but anyways, it's really not a bad title, it's pretty good, fits rather well, and I have to thank Amy for pretty much coming up with it... sure, it's not the exact thing she said, but hey, if she hadn't said that, I would still have no idea what to title it. So thank you!!!!! Forever and ever and ever and I could go on like this forever and ever and ever but I probably sound annoying and stupid right now so I'll stop. Bye!  --Rachel

December 7, 2008

Okay. Okay. Okay. *Takes several deep breaths* I. Am. At. The. Climax. AKA--I'M NEARLY DONE!!!!!REJOICE!!!!!!!JOY TO THE WORLD, THE BOOK'S ALMOST DONE... MERRY VERY EARLY CHRISTMAS PPL! (I'M A BIT HAPPY HERE....)-A very excited Rachel

December 14th, 2008

Okay, as Rachel just stated, she was at the climax, and she has already turned that into me and her other editor. She's practically done, and we'll be starting the second book and day now, which the three of us are very excited about. I wish I could just upload the entire thing, but we haven't gotten it copyrighted yet. We're kind of debating it here. But, I'm excited, because one of the characters just got proposed to, and I love the romance stuff, so I'm filled with joy and tears at the moment. But, Merry Christmas/Kwanzaa/Hanukkah/New Year's/ whatever you celebrate. I'm sorry I don't know them all!!!
Trigger
Oh, and just added at 10:18pm, Rachel has one more page to go and then we will officially be done with the first book of the trilogy, possibly series. You have no idea how excited the following people are: Author, Editor(s), Trigger, Friends, Family, and Publisher(s)...That ones kind of untrue...LoL... Okay, just thought you'd like to know...G'night!

December 18, 2008

BETHANY! YOU WERENT SUPPOSED TO SAY ANYTHING! GR... WELL... ANYWAYS...I HAVE FINISHED WITH THE FIRST BOOK, INCOGNITO, OF THE _DONT_KNOW_YET_ TRILOGY!!!!!!!!!! MY FIRST BOOK THAT I HAVE EVER FINISHED!!!!! REJOICE!!!!!!! JOY TO THE WORLD, MY BOOK IS DONE. LET ALL THE NET... UM.... KNOW!!!! LET EVERYONE SEE THIS.... UPDATE.... AND I WILL SIT HERE SCREAMING, AND I WILL SIT HERE SCREAMING, AND IIIIIII WILL SIT HERE SCREAMING..... HEH.... HEH.... LAUGH AT ME ALL YOU WANT, IM EXCITED...A NOTE--I ACTUALLY FINISHED ON TUESDAY, ON THE 16TH, BUT DIDNT GET A CHANCE TO PUT IT UP HERE... SORRY.
-RACHEL